Draw Me Like One of Your Human Girls 2

I've had this idea swimming around my head for a couple of weeks, and finally put it on paper.

It sucks.

Not the drawing itself, I'm fairly happy with that, but the coloring. I'm really happy with the way the light turned out, but the crosshatching is terrible. If you keep doing what you've always done you'll keep getting what you've always gotten, so experimentation is important, and I have learned from this, so am glad I did it, but for a first foray into nsfw territory, I wish it were better.

Twilight herself, at least says she likes it. That it's the thought that counts, and that she doesn't think it's a failure. I think she's too kind, but what can I say, other than "Yes dear, thank you dear?" She's the princess, after all.